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I'd say it is neither. I'd class it as a reflection as seen in journals. You purge your anger and settle for joy. If it works, it is time well spent.
Wow! Love it! some of the best poetry is a reflection, of life!
Wow I wish my anger were that uncomplicated. Thanks for sharing.
A madsong... if Blake, why not giggles? "...at unawares" is off kilter grammatically, so drop 'at' in L1. Later on 'relishing' is a transitive verb's present participle, so would not be used with a prepositional phrase. Is this from the madness of the madsong? Dunno... interesting write though.
"In ANGER I danced" what do you think? Poetry or garbage? c/c? by Sandy giggles 1-11-10 anger came upon me at unawares overcoming any niceties left within only vile bitterness spewed forth could not control this outburst didn't have a clue from whence it came it felt so good to get all worked up over nothing so it seemed I put on some "angry" music and danced like a wild banshee cutting loose across the yard kicking up snow, scaring the dogs those stupid excuses for dogs of the neighbors relishing in this fit of anger displayed made some snowballs to through at the cats they chased them like kittens in the spring time then I started to laugh... a maniacal grumble from deep within well, anger soon left and I was me giggling and wiggling through the snow hoping to get in before I surely froze feeling refreshed and renewed for a while now dishes to do and laundry again the work of a woman, never seems done. through should be throw--snowballs to throw at the cats...
"In ANGER I danced" what do you think? Poetry or garbage? c/c?
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