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I implore you c/c my poem...it's not what I usually write? I'm not finished yet. I usually don't do rhyming poems but I wanted to give it a chilling quality. Anyway, please R/C, it's much appreciated! Night was arching overhead my midnight trek across the park. An earthen chill rendered me silent when a nearing mass shattered the dark. The carriage engulfed me suddenly the stallion's hooves if made by glass, the driver's smile bleached the night while his reigns on my face shadows cast. "This ground's hardly safe for a woman alone." He opened his doors while my eyes closed towards home. So the carriage moved on into blackening scenes, the ethereal ride held illusions of dreams. Then limbs of wood cracked and the grip of air snapped, from its crevices came figures; the carriage was lapped. I'm adding more but what are your thoughts so far?
I implore you c/c my poem...it's not what I usually write?
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