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  1. You can probably tell from my posts (if you've...

    You can probably tell from my posts (if you've ever looked) that I'm partial to meter and rhyme. I do, however, like ALL kinds of poetry, including less popular forms.
  2. A sestina prompted by something Sue wrote yesterday. What is wrong (or right) with it?

    Young Love

    One look from him, her heart was swept away!
    Unsteady knees and trembling hands betrayed
    that firm resolve she'd made another day
    before events that shape a youthful mind
    could...
  3. A sestina prompted by something Sue wrote yesterday. What is wrong (or right) with it?

    Young Love

    One look from him, her heart was swept away!
    Unsteady knees and trembling hands betrayed
    that firm resolve she'd made another day
    before events that shape a youthful mind
    could...
  4. Can you offer some improvement for this rancid . . . Recipe?

    Recipe

    Start with a bagful
    of words from the past.

    Stir in some similes
    like a proper chef.

    Add a little irony
    for a touch of spice.
  5. Will you please comment on this bit of free verse?

    Midnight Message

    In the middle of the night
    I wake from dreaming of being
    a well-known actress

    From a popular show
    I've always considered
    overly-saccharined pap.
  6. Will you walk with me [c/c] on the ... Beach?

    Memories of the Beach

    Morning air is crisp and clear,
    a taste of salt in every breath,
    where waves wash along the shore
    as if wanting to walk with me.

    Overhead in contentious flight,
    gulls...
  7. Would you like another villanelle (The Wolf)?

    If you don't like it, that's okay. I just happen to be captivated by the format of the villanelle and feel like sharing it with others.


    The Wolf

    An eerie echo, plaintive cry,
    is heard at...
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    Can you hear the tolling of the bell?

    Tolling Of The Bell
    (a villanelle)

    Can you hear the tolling of the bell,
    whose wistful tones imprint upon the air?
    A doleful bell with stories yet to tell.

    A sad refrain that passes o'er the...
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    Anyone up for a Meteor Shower poem?

    Meteor Shower

    Astroll in the moon's misty white
    Keep an eye on the sky tonite

    Where stars perform an ancient rite
    When they explode in brilliant light

    To tease the senses and incite
    Both...
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    Since Hannah Moved Away The tires on my...

    Since Hannah Moved Away

    The tires on my bike are flat.
    The sky is grouchy gray.
    At least it sure feels like that
    Since Hanna moved away.

    Chocolate ice cream tastes like prunes....
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    My favorite is Sara Teasdale but I also like many...

    My favorite is Sara Teasdale but I also like many others almost as well.

    Gifts

    I gave my first love laughter,
    I gave my second tears,
    I gave my third love silence
    Through all the years.
    ...
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