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  1. Hi Dave, UM I sit on the big gray book of rules ...

    Hi Dave, UM I sit on the big gray book of rules
    to boost myself up
    and employ meaning as my tools.
    After three years I'm pretty much aware
    of my place in my scrambled poetry
    and type with one...
  2. Will you comment on my rambling please?

    Feeling then, the long blade of winter
    as it slid through closed windows
    insisting on ripping, stealing
    my sleeping warmth cocooned
    stabbing at my upturned form
    awakened by an agitated flock ...
  3. Almost late rambling, will you comment please?

    This is not at all a Haiku
    or even a decent Senryu
    it's just a night sharing with you.

    The oyster lays bedded.

    It only takes
    an irritating grain of sand
    to give birth to a pearl
  4. Rambling in free verse, will you comment please?

    It's rife with land mines
    hidden by intent
    and there are no pages sequential
    with lines, to color in the empty
    as we ignore dictates to stay inside.
    There are no maps
    to refer to as we seek...
  5. Rambling in free verse, will you comment please?

    It's rife with land mines
    hidden by intent
    and there are no pages sequential
    with lines, to color in the empty
    as we ignore dictates to stay inside.
    There are no maps
    to refer to as we seek...
  6. Wandering minds wanna know, will you comment please?

    In crossing a desert
    invented, in the heat
    of a surmised mirage
    a lizard presented
    dead and drying in the sun,

    changed nothing,
    but a thought
    "This would make a nice belt,
    two however...
  7. Just rambling, will you comment please?

    Hunters take trophies
    the hungry, gathering sustenance
    are more fulfilled
  8. A Haiku, I hope, will you comment please?

    Hushed are the waves
    washing, almost forgotten
    upon morning tide
    Even with the suggestion of breaking I still count 5 - 7 - 5,,, 17, though "are" or "the" are often not considered as syllables...
  9. Haiku-ish, will you comment please?

    Midnight, in the eastern sky
    my wishin star hides in clouds
    hung low, tomorrow

    I'll try again
    Wishin Y'all a good night
  10. Might this be two poems, or part of a tome? Will you comment please?

    A story in ever line written
    a line in every story, fittin
    calculate the sum of the essence
    recheck figures, missed directions
    suggested.

    This is not a game you see
    it is some culmination of...
  11. Not so poetry, will you C/C please?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBagqdscIdQ

    This year past will last long
    in memories sung
    as joyful and sad songs.

    I've met and kept so many here
    in issues resounding,
    whom I've not helped...
  12. I wonder as I wander, will you C/C please?

    I've walked on the surface of the Sun
    cold the sense in high degrees
    Touched the Moon
    dead but blistered, my knees

    crawling.

    Cosmic storm
    Tossed, turning
    always burning
  13. Early rambling, will you C/C please?

    Flying from the peak of the barn roof
    illogical, yet telling proof
    that newspaper wings and strings
    didn't work,
    Twice tried.

    Icarus may not have been such a fool
    in his dreams, crafted the...
  14. Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler?
    Who is the fool and who is the fool-er?
    In passing, flashing broad smiles
    intentionally the style,
    Panama city tan,
    was the plan.
    Nice dress I...
  15. Always weary, wandering, wondering, will you C/C please?

    Plastic colors glow in the sun, streaming
    from tight handle grips
    Speeding tricycle, screaming, dreaming
    Fast as you can child
    you will go
    growing blindly into your wild.
    Chrome coated bell...
  16. Early rambling, will you C/C please?

    Flying from the peak of the barn roof
    illogical, yet telling proof
    that newspaper wings and strings
    didn't work,
    Twice tried.

    Icarus may not have been such a fool
    in his dreams, crafted the...
  17. Sleepy rambling, will you C/C please?

    Splendiferous
    Glamtamerous
    Unilaterous
    familimus
    unpretentiflus
    credibilous
    naughtynicetruss
    conjectoreous
    canflantankeritus
    oblivioulus
  18. Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler?
    Who is the fool and who is the fool-er?
    In passing, flashing broad smiles
    intentionally the style,
    Panama city tan,
    was the plan.
    Nice dress I...
  19. Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler?
    Who is the fool and who is the fool-er?
    In passing, flashing broad smiles
    intentionally the style,
    Panama city tan,
    was the plan.
    Nice dress I...
  20. Pleasantries exchanged, will you C/C please?

    Is this what goes on at the work water cooler?
    Who is the fool and who is the fool-er?
    In passing, flashing broad smiles
    intentionally the style,
    Panama city tan,
    was the plan.
    Nice dress I...
  21. Reflective rambling; Will you comment please?

    Begged Jelly bread
    Bumped my head walkin
    Under the kitchen sink,
    Got my slice in any case.

    Rusting plow, tended fields
    Tall grass yielding to footfalls, pretending
    No wild to hide from, but...
  22. Will you dance with me in the rain?

    First take off yer shoes.

    Dance with me in the gentle rain
    Bound and bounce through muddy puddles
    These clouds of Gray will pass too soon
    Sing with the spirit of the natural sounds

    Share the...
  23. Ode to a Guitar. Comment on this please?

    Cold, sitting, crafted in passion
    It rests, silent; no emotion expressed
    Until the 'Artists' touch
    Rising to its potential

    Gentle tones, melodies evoke
    A notion to quietly listen
    Relate in...
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    Is this almost Haiku?

    Before dawn
    The flower's shadow
    Almost blooms.

    Thanks Y'all
    Hugs y'all and that's why asked if it was 'almost' smiles
  25. Exploring the laws of nature. Will you comment please?

    Once more expressing my child like goofy
    I have to refer to "Peanuts and Lucy'
    I once, no twice, yowee no thrice
    I, the goof, tried to fly to the skies off the barn roof

    I wore my Giants ring...
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