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  1. I can't possibly pick one over the other. They...

    I can't possibly pick one over the other. They are ALL equally important to me.
  2. Would you be flattered if this was you? It's about Milieu?

    Milieu the Number 1 Answerer on the USA Leader board (the one with the most BA's) has altered his/her avatar. Yes that's right, and has now included the name "The Top Dog' which was one that I used...
  3. Could I have your suggestions please to improve this short piece of free verse,

    thank you? Still experimenting with different forms


    Dyslexic grip

    i captured
    dissappointment
    and held it in my eye
    saw clear its choked
    expression
  4. Can someone, please help me with line breaks and punctuation for my free...

    ...verse, thank you? Still inspired by Lovechild's question on pain, trying to experiment


    A bronze coin dropped
    inside the slot
    registered
    in my mind
    the thinking deep
    made me weep...
  5. Have any of you heard of a poetry book "A Glass Half Full" by Felix Dennis?

    This is a poet, (I think he is British) now in his 60's who is also a rich business man. I bought this book earlier this week and just love some of his stuff. He has homes in New York as well as...
  6. Would you like to visit my garden? Comments and critique welcome, thanks?

    Our cherry tree's pink petal fall
    Drifts lightly over garden wall,
    And settles on the cold, damp ground,
    Sublime, in silence, not a sound.

    Magnolia my special treat,
    The creamy blooms blush,...
  7. Would you comment and critique on my revised poem please? thanks?

    Windsor Sleeps

    A mist has crept and crawled its way
    across the fields to Eton's bank,
    to where our craft is safely moored
    by tow path route, sop wet and dank.

    The haze stops short of river...
  8. Hello Sin, she says with a lump in her throat and...

    Hello Sin, she says with a lump in her throat and a tear in her eye after watching this.

    Miss your poetry on this site
  9. Not in my book, I am no coward and neither do I...

    Not in my book, I am no coward and neither do I hide behind a creative mask anymore. Although, it could be said I did once upon a time, for fear of being ridiculed for my poetic efforts. I stand in...
  10. This is a reposting of my deleted poem, please can you help me to improve it. Thanks?

    A single tear tripped down his cheek
    And perched itself on tip of lip.
    He knew that I had seen it run,
    So came out with a shotgun quip

    "The smoke from fire, caused eyes to smart"
    I said to him...
  11. Are there any poets out there not traveling in space who can read my poem c/c?

    Well wedded

    A poem for my love, I penned,
    A first for me it must be said.
    Then placed it with his Christmas card
    Near photograph of day we wed.

    The words I wrote, escaped the veil,...
  12. You really got me thinking here. Wonder whether...

    You really got me thinking here. Wonder whether my other half would relate well to this poem of yours? Aging process/ moods? Perfect last line "And I will love her 'til my days are done". very...
  13. Do you get inspired to write when looking at the stars and moon in the night skies?...

    ...Please comment on my poem? All I am

    A converted loft is where I lie
    with window in its sloping roof,
    and there I view the midnight sky,
    its ball of moon which stands aloof

    Soft lunar...
  14. Hello, I have to agree with what HP has said. It...

    Hello, I have to agree with what HP has said. It took me quite sometime before my poems started to get noticed. You just need to persevere. I also try to look at posts other than those of my...
  15. Calling all established and budding poets. Which is the first poem that inspired your...

    ...love of poetry? My Grandad used to recite The Lady of Shalott to me when I was 9. (Alfred Tennyson) I knew great chunks of it off by heart. Loved poetry ever since
  16. Calling all established and budding poets. Where are you when you write your poems?

    I write mine in my bedroom, which is double aspect. One window looks out on to a beautiful silver birch tree, which can inspire me all year round with the changing seasons.(it's taller than the...
  17. Don't give up the day job, you will need it to...

    Don't give up the day job, you will need it to pay the bills
  18. Don't give up the day job, you will need it to...

    Don't give up the day job, you will need it to pay the bills
  19. It's very interesting that Sandy has raised this....

    It's very interesting that Sandy has raised this. I did feel that when I started posting (about five weeks ago) that it was a bit like a club and I wondered how long it would be before I could become...
  20. Cassie - An acrostic poem Chris, not Cassie...

    Cassie - An acrostic poem

    Chris, not Cassie
    Affectionate by nature
    Sassie in outlook
    Sensuous and perceptive
    Imagination runs free
    Ever grateful for what she's got
  21. Cassie - An acrostic poem Chris, not Cassie...

    Cassie - An acrostic poem

    Chris, not Cassie
    Affectionate by nature
    Sassie in outlook
    Sensuous and perceptive
    Imagination runs free
    Ever grateful for what she's got
  22. Cassie - An acrostic poem Chris, not Cassie...

    Cassie - An acrostic poem

    Chris, not Cassie
    Affectionate by nature
    Sassie in outlook
    Sensuous and perceptive
    Imagination runs free
    Ever grateful for what she's got
  23. Do you write poetry after the loss of a loved one? - Please comment on these 2 short...

    ...poems, thanks? The Time Thief

    The seasons come, the seasons go
    From winter chill to bursting spring
    Then summer suns, and leafy fall.
    Whilst all around I sense the change
    The loss of you...
  24. Well, I'm just wondering whether it is your...

    Well, I'm just wondering whether it is your intention to deliberately keep the reader out? Don't understand what you are getting at. Try again
  25. Do you appreciate what you've got? Please comment and rate my poem - thanks?

    Appreciation

    Jeannie came a calling, she called for me last night
    Just as I was drifting, she filtered back in sight
    Skipping through my day dream, she took me by surprise
    Standing with her...
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