**walking b4 talking**
with this read
and never said
explain why
thinking guy,
whose habits we create
why we all do so many things alike
why we need 2 get a mate
is our nose really a spike?
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poetry please comment, poetry please comment?
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10-01-2009, 08:38 PM #2just_a_servant_of_Jah
Guesttruly i dont get it, what where you trying to express i can help u only if you tell me what you meant...
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Well, I'm just wondering whether it is your intention to deliberately keep the reader out? Don't understand what you are getting at. Try again
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