Could you guys do a little free write for me? And give me some ideas? Thanks. I really appreciate it! P.S IT HAS TO BE ROMANTICISM, so im using nature and making it a part of it.
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10-05-2009, 12:41 AM #1royal20
Guestim writing a poem, about a guy who loves a girl but she will never know that he does.?
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Here's something to put in your mind, then. It's unrequited love, the young mans career and his business of the day just flying away 'cos he admires the girl from afar so very much. (He's in a strange business, catching birds, but it used to be a living at one point).
It's still cheerful, too. It's the best!
Love Without Hope
Love without hope, as when the young bird-catcher
Swept off his tall hat to the Squire's own daughter,
So let the imprisoned larks escape and fly
Singing about her head, as she rode by.
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10-05-2009, 12:41 AM #3
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Here's something to put in your mind, then. It's unrequited love, the young mans career and his business of the day just flying away 'cos he admires the girl from afar so very much. (He's in a strange business, catching birds, but it used to be a living at one point).
It's still cheerful, too. It's the best!
Love Without Hope
Love without hope, as when the young bird-catcher
Swept off his tall hat to the Squire's own daughter,
So let the imprisoned larks escape and fly
Singing about her head, as she rode by.
Robert Graves
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10-05-2009, 12:42 AM #4
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Don't attempt poetry if you don't feel it. It's pointless and will turn out shit.
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10-05-2009, 12:43 AM #5
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Here's something to put in your mind, then. It's unrequited love, the young mans career and his business of the day just flying away 'cos he admires the girl from afar so very much. (He's in a strange business, catching birds, but it used to be a living at one point).
It's still cheerful, too. It's the best!
Love Without Hope
Love without hope, as when the young bird-catcher
Swept off his tall hat to the Squire's own daughter,
So let the imprisoned larks escape and fly
Singing about her head, as she rode by.
Robert Graves
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