Are these lyrics I wrote for my band good? I want them to be grunge. Please leave suggestions!


Putting Out the Fire With More Gasoline:

This fire burns within
The walls the sights unseen
The memory's before death
The time when he left

Choking in the fresh air
Falling into the trance
All for a dare
He never stood a chance
It's like putting out a fire
With More Gasoline

He feel silent
Death becoming apparent
His senses were violent
His idea transparent

What to gain?
Mystery, Inflame?
Inlight, Inflame
Fear and Pain

Choking in the fresh air
Falling into the trance
All for a dare
He never stood a chance
It's like putting out a fire
With More Gasoline