So I have to write a free verse poem for School, and I dont know if its good enough. Constructive critisism please!

This city I love
With Science World and Skytrains
The weather and all its seasons in 1 day
Every minute weather changing
Skies blue and sunny to gray and rainy
Queen Elizabeth Park and Town Center
Families giggling and having a good time with the people they love, in the city they love
I miss the Olympics, all countries coming together as 1
In Vancouver
The City I love