So i have been set an english assignment, it is a controlled assessment and worth 7.5% of my GCSE. I done the mock and i got an A grade, but i really want an A* and i can only do this if i have more desriptions. So please can you help me?
The assessment is a diary entry of a homeless person, and i need some good descriptions of how the character may look and feel emotionally. Also, possible their point of view of the world around them. My character is of a young girl who left home because of child abuse.
Please help !