1.) Your first sentence should have a question mark at the end, since you're asking him why he would want Joey Jordison in the poll.
2.) The only sentence you wrote that started with a capital letter is the last one which starts with "I".
3.) Yeah, you really shouldn't start a sentence with "and"
4.) In that same sentence that starts with "and", you wrote "im" instead of "I'm". This is a double mistake seeing as how you, (a) didn't capitalize the "I", and (b) didn't include the apostrophe.
Bottom line: you shouldn't criticize someone else's grammar if you're grammar is bad as well......hypocrite.
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