...only 4 sentences long? HELP? Hi, I’m Sandra Smith, here to help you transfer the property title of your home, giving you legal ownership, more rights, full control, and plentiful benefits from the property. If a deceased or missing home owner leaves no Last Will & Testament, it can be very difficult to transfer title of the home. Home Title Solutions can help. With over 135 combined years of experience, this third-generation company has helped thousands of Californians just like you.


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I want them to SEE and FEEL the benefits of how if they owned the home it would help them...I really want to CONNECT with them....what should I change or say? Basically what I do is assist people with attorneys/the judicial system. Thanks for your input.