Is it okay to write that please?

"He evoques the Pandora radio whose aim is to create our own radio. To sum up, the journalist thinks that technology had changed the Experience of Music but it's just an evolution of ways to listen to it. That's normal. He thinks that we can still be surprised by music. To me, you can't. I don't agree with him. I am a vinyl purist and listening to music thanks to technology is absurd"

thanks a lot!