i want some feedback on this poem before i give it to the girl.


The Question
A question arises in my mind
When I hear her laugh I can't define
What is this desire deep in me?
That flutters by in my tummy

A question arises in my mind
How can one girl be so divine?
Her light shines bright in all she do
Bringing me warmth through and through

A question arises in my mind
Have I ever met such a one of a kind?
So delightfully different not strange in the least
Like a breath of fresh air or a wondrous feast

A question arises in my mind
How can wisdom come from one so fine?
Speaking her mind in one of my favorite classes
Like a poet at a poppet speaking truth to the masses

A question arises in my mind
Will one so kind ever be mine?
I will never know if I don't take a chance
So I guess the real question is

Will you come with me to the dance?

Make no mistake this note is for you
It took a bit of time for this poem to stew
Even if you don't see me in this light
Sarah, I want you to I think you're just right