Had to create a sonnet poem for English class having to do with love, anything pertaining to love. Had to have 14 lines and 10 syllables per each. Would you critique it, and tell me if there are any errors or anyway make it better somehow.

Memories were faded out through summer
Hastily forgotten and left behind,
Making their first appearance a bummer,
A first impression was now loosely blind

While snow flakes collapsed to the soling ground,
Two distinct eyes gazed once more with no frowns,
The treasure was no longer lost, but found
In what seemed to be their new born hometown

A speck of touch was felt between the two
Turning back into a colorful scene,
My thoughts during the time was "I love you"
Repeating the works back in a routine

Upon what ought to be a remembrance
Was reassured by your disappearance.