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    Need help with wording a sentence for a publication?

    I am in the process of writing a paper for the school yearbook, the theme is Every Minute Counts. I would like to conclude that we (the yearbook staff) hope that as you look back, you can say you've made Every Minute Count.
    I feel like the "we" is inappropriate. Yes, we the staff do hope they can do this, but I as an individual will have my name under it as the writer. Does anyone have suggestions on how else I can word this sentence without saying we or The Yearbook staff? All suggestions are welcome. Thanks!
    Thank you GeneL, but that is not the sentence I need help on. It's the "we hope that as you look back, you can say you've made Every Minute Count."

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    Just say...

    "The staff hopes to be able to do this, and acting as an individual, I will have my name beneath it identifying myself as the writer."

    EDIT:
    Ok, your question was a bit confusing. Perhaps if you had put the part you needed help on in quotes or on a separate line would have helped.

    "In conclusion, the staff sincerely hopes that, as you look back upon your experience here, you can say without question you have made: Every Minute Count."

 

 

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