He is spinning with arms wide open, his jacket (becoming) his cape, and he is falling, tumbling, rolling on the green grass.
For the "becoming" word-his jacket is not literally becoming a cape. Need help in describing this action (jacket flying as he spins).
Does the metaphor "green carpet" make sense when describing grass?
thanks all. Definitely will appreciate any further ideas on the sentence.
jelesais... - that word is PERFECT. thanks!
Other answerers: i understand the scenery point now (didnt realise this before), thankyou!
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