Is my blurb okay for my book?

[Talia]

well, I'm currently writing a story on Wattpad, and I'm not very good at writing blurbs.. So I was wondering if it sounded okay..
" Two people, two hearts, two heads, two minds.. One secret. Timmy was an ordinary Irish boy from Ireland, who moves away from his hometown to London. Where he meets Vikki O'Conner. Everything seems perfect, until Tommy finds out a deep dark secret about Vikki which is far from perfect. This will turn both there lives upside down. Will he accept the secret, or let there relationship fall to pieces".
(If you can help me out that would mean a lot, and this is a fanfiction.. But I just changed there names)

[fortion]

seems good talia,best of luck with it...:-)