Thread: Does this need more something to finish it? A poem?

As is, perfect. Flow is excellent and picture you painted is good.

nice wordage!

no it is perfect and amazing.

those words were amazing
no need for a reply
hence they are making
the sadness fly

my greetings.......

And if so...what would you suggest?

A Bad Dream

When midnight stalks the darkened hall
with shadowed stealth and stockinged feet,
an apparition slips inside
and stands where death and darkness meet.

A ghoulish prince with hooded veil,
who cloaks intent with slitted eye..
descends the stairs without a sound,
an icy draft when he floats by.

You toss and turn in fitful sleep,
what nightmare this that steal your dreams?
Awake with sweat upon your brow,
and silent terror in your screams.

With widened eyes you search the dark
and fear to look beneath the bed,
for surely nothing lurks but thoughts
of childish stories in your head?