I wrote this a couple nights ago. Any suggestions or comments?
Thanks in advance


I ran and ran and ran
Until my muscles burned
I felt I would collapse
But I knew I couldn't stop

I ran and ran and ran
Until I couldn't breathe
I ran North, South, East and West
Cross country, bordered by the sea

I ran and ran and ran
Until my vision blurred
Life forms were speeding by
Irrelevant in my mind

I ran and ran and ran
Until my legs gave out from underneath
I had to keep on going
And so I ran some more
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