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    "A Movie Script" a poem for comments, Do you watch the classics?

    "A Movie Script"

    With alert bright eyes
    ears open wide
    and a silent voice,
    a child watches
    a daily movie show,
    one of a kind
    never seen on screen,
    starring classic characters
    parents, siblings, friends,
    from this the child learns
    how to see, hear and speak.
    Take one, scene two
    The child appears at school
    carrying
    the kit of homemade tools.

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    Yes Jenny, hubby and I watch classics all the time. You've captured the style perfectly. Interesting and well written. Thanks for sharing. Good job!

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    The child is a willing participant in viewing life before his/her eyes. Nice twist to a theme and I liked your ending line.

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    Amazing. It is a very good poem. You have painted the childhood and the works which he does in his childhood. I like this poem. very good. please keep it up.

 

 

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