Please comment on my new song: "Hope Flash" (Music still needs to be added.)


Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care


Someone says they really miss the smile on your face
How you used to make them laugh while putting people in their place
The way you always cared to listen about the problems that they had
That you always tried to help when things turned from good to bad

Someone smiles giving you a wink as your walking down the hall
They approach, page in hand, and ask you to someday call
Saying it’s been nice knowing you they turn and go to leave
But not before they turn around and tug on your sleeve

And hug you


Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care


As they vanish into the distance you stand frozen in place
Someone had just invaded your personal space
The disconcerting fact was that you really didn’t mind
You honestly were glad and felt cared for inside

A smile without intent cracked upon your face
You snap out of it and glace about to the rest of the human race
You just had to be sure no one saw what you just did
No one could be allowed to see the smile you just hid

Or the truth

Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care


You turn from your gaze and start walking for the door
All the while, your heart is yearning for more
The warmth traveled right down to the core
And you swore
You’ve never felt so good

As you walk, you’re staring at the page
Your mental processes must rearrange
Someone who you thought cared not did something strange
Brain shouts danger
But you just flip up your hood


And walk in the rain
Outside where you’re now free
In the rain
Which washes away your misery
In the rain
You’re no longer lonely
In the rain
If only


Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care


Someone’s been on your mind all day as you stare at each word
Your heart’s racing as you recall everything you that had heard
Lightning flashes and danger warns but you wash it from your mind
You grab your phone and dial slow as you build all courage you can find

Someone answers and the voice is soothing to your ear
You speak clearly from your heart true and sincere
The line goes dead for a good minute or so
Someone says thank you but they want you to know

What can you do

Someone doesn’t
Love you


Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care


Hope flash
The blinding light
Joy and delight does fill the air

Hope flash
Wonderful sight
Everything’s alright when someone appears to care