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    Are there any poets out there not traveling in space who can read my poem c/c?

    Well wedded

    A poem for my love, I penned,
    A first for me it must be said.
    Then placed it with his Christmas card
    Near photograph of day we wed.

    The words I wrote, escaped the veil,
    Explaining what he meant to me,
    In case with years, he misconstrued
    My feelings, for complacency.

    I watched him closely, as he scanned,
    White printed page, he slowly read
    As I sat waiting for response,
    From jokes he stores inside his head.

    But nothing came, I simply saw
    A hand that trembled with surprise,
    A mouth that at the corners dropped
    And tears that stung his lovely eyes.

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    Lovely... Just lovely.

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    A lovely poem, Cassie. "From jokes he stores inside his head" a line most of us gals can relate to. I love the last stanza. So sweet. Thanks for sharing.

 

 

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