If you're interested in reading it, I would be utterly grateful. I need some feedback on it, because I've just put it on a new site and I don't have any readers yet. Here is a synopsis: Claire Valentine is just a regular teenage girl living in a small town in Ohio. A new student arrives on the first day of school, and his good looks and mysterious vibes attract Claire, and all the other girls in school. But soon Claire finds out that his heavenly looks serve an ironic purpose in his reason for being on Earth. Claire's world is turned upside down when this new guy in school, Gabriel, tells her that she is humanity's only hope for survival through the upcoming apocalypse. Will she leave her life for this gorgeous stranger, or will the human race be lost forever? Read on to find out...


Here is the link to the story: http://member.mibba.com/156352/
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Thanks to anyone that does this!!