~Her one last cry... a sad free verse.....?

[Nocturna]

Hated myself
For falling in
This thing called love
Not meant for me

Believing in
The words you said
I gave my all
And dearly paid

Great misery
A broken soul
That could not live
Without its half

I saw in you
All dreams come true
And all my hopes
Were shining new

I was not seen
Nor really heard
My cries outloud
are now interred

You walked away
And took with you
The one true love
I ever knew

So here I lay
Now dead and gone
Never to cry
Never to hope

[knightrunner13]

Well done

[Caz]

Very nice its sad and comes from the heart Its good.

[hunter]

Is there a question here?

[Sonic]

You are right, it is sad in a way. But then think about the message hidden behind the words. Sometimes love can be hard as a rock and cold as ice. Sometimes that seemingly perfect person is not always who you think they are. Trust in your heart, for letting fate guide your life is not always the best option.


"Live for the moment, the moment is now!"