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  • 07-08-2009, 11:58 PM
    <3cute, young and wild!<3

    what do u think of my poem???......?

    YOU

    when you feel ur life is coming to an end
    someone comes around and cheers you up again
    when your feeling you can't do anymore
    she makes you happy and you love her even more
    when tears are rolling down your face
    she wipes them away and says baby everything is ok
    when she falls asleep
    your right beside her watching over her protectively
    when she wakes up in your arms
    she smiles knowing you will never do any harm
    when she confesses her true feelings to you
    you whisper i love you and always will
    when you get down on one knee
    that day you will be happy forever
    she will always say yes to you
    you are the one she loves
    she will never leave you
    that would break your heart again
    she will lose all her innocence to you
    but the you will become a part of her
    her and her baby will stay with you
    you love your family and she knows you do
    she will always have 4 words for you
    I love you baby!

    -a 16 year old girl

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