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  • 06-10-2012, 08:15 AM
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    Will you comment on my rambling please?

    Feeling then, the long blade of winter
    as it slid through closed windows
    insisting on ripping, stealing
    my sleeping warmth cocooned
    stabbing at my upturned form
    awakened by an agitated flock
    of crows teasing the power line,
    hovering not quite hidden in naked trees
    I rose, cursing the day,
    yet thankful I woke.
    How odd the dichotomy.
    Black cackling, replacing
    missing leaves taken to flight
    almost as if pulsating smoke
    spiraling round and back.
    passed now that season, yet
    leaving behind memories
    in fractured glass, still weaving
    what once was a blanket
    pulled close, deceiving.
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