Good blurb for my book?

So i am on draft 4 of the blurb, what about this one?
"Elena Hayden was just an ordinary orphan before she finds herself on her way to Ironwald’s academy of magic. Learning about the magic arts, she finds an unlikely friend in a Frapspurg, a misunderstood outcast in the wizarding world, but the perils of Ironwald aren’t the only things on her mind, persistently nudging she is confronted with the dilemma of having no magic blood; Elena must begin to discover why she has magical ability at all."
Would you like to read this book, some people have said it sounds like Harry Potter so i have changed it and i hope it doesn't sound like Harry Potter any more, so tell me what you think or any suggestions you have.