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    If you could trade places with any of the poets in this section for a day, who...

    ...would it be? BQ: Why? And do you think you could convince people you were them?

    BBQ: Will you write a few lines or a stanza in their style to prove you could?

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    Happy Hiram.To find out why he is always happy.
    Keep writing ,so i can be happy.I find nothing good
    at all about your poem.So? you're 14?
    Why i keep getting thumbs down?

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    Dave:
    A blond woman lay
    Unconscious on the dusty streets
    Of Puerto Vallarta in a Red dress
    That was once yellow
    before she was trampled
    by horses
    of purest White.

    HH:
    I love hating people
    Now write something good!

    Himedal:
    Goth is not dark
    Not dark
    It is passion
    Mixed with death

    Mtheory:
    The puzzle remains
    Prismatic yet sane
    Hypothesis proven
    Salvation regain

    Cheesey:
    There once was a poet named Rockov
    Who kissed every arse he could think of

    Peter:
    You accuse with such threats,
    And point your pointer finger
    but I say truly
    You are not pointing high enough

    Adam Snow:
    O My Convalescence!

    Kirby:
    This place
    is always better
    in my mind.
    Bring it!

    D:
    Mornin' Yowee!!
    It's cold out Yowee!

    Gary:
    Easter is a special
    Time of celebration
    For dust-bunnies


    NO OFFENSE MEANT! Only playing! We good?

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    Okay, I'll be Dave for the day. Here is what I would write if I were Dave:

    The woman was in three pieces
    torso in the dumpster,
    legs sticking out from the sewer grate
    The arms, neck and head
    hung light Christmas lights.

    The detective didn't find this
    in the least disturbing or odd
    as it was his wife's sister
    and she had it coming.

    Now all praise Jesus and
    Love your fellow man,
    Which is perfectly consistent
    with dead women in a dumpster.

    Throw in a little whiskey
    a rat scurrying around
    a reference to my favorite poet
    and then I am done.

    Please don't criticize or be
    mean, I am a delicate soul
    and I may need to block you.
    The ladies all love me,
    (well at least the live ones.)

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    I'd trade places with Dallas for a day..... That way she could be me & I could be her & she would have one whole day of no pain or anything

    I could never write in Dallas' style of writing.. I'm too unconnected with nature... What? It's the truth! :P

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    As a male, I can refer to males with more accuracy:
    1. mtheory
    2. Gene
    3. HH
    4. Fred
    5. Himedal
    I consider them to have something compatible to my way of thinking. Complicated also unexplored.
    Among women:
    1. Damsy Blues
    2. LoveChild
    3. HumptyDumpty
    4. Kirby
    5. Doe
    6. Elys
    Interesting femmes, all unique, tested, tried out souls, complicated but kind, true ladies and firm. Well respected all of them, genuine.
    Good question!!!

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    I don't know so much if I could even stand in the shoes of the of the poets I know here, but sure can think of it as a gathering together those of like passions.

    In fact in a gatherin like that I might just be on the side listenin in jaw droppin awe.Oh that was kinda the BQ

    Yowee this might be hard?

    Cerulean sky would have to be in yers.
    Vibrant images painted
    as the brush takes control of the artist

    Sidewalks dirty in the pall
    old placards peeling
    from crumble walls,
    as this city loses its feeling

    That was kinda BuK but probly don't do him justice

    Cassie is fragarnt vines growin on her garden wall

    HH is forthright, not afraid at all.

    HD is so loved,and her soul was worn outside of her

    Nancy and BG, tickle me, my first sisters, allowed my free.

    Liz is pretty intense sometimes, but softness can be read between the lines.

    So many I probly will miss, so if I do here's a tender kiss, Ben, and Ma, and Sue, Blue and Skinny, I love you too.

    Serene, Debra, Ash and Cheese, Taghi I couldn't forget you, please.

    HS, TC, haven't seen in awhile, Tori and Oak bring me smiles,

    Susanna, Jenny, Gemeni, Sandy giggles, Gary tickles, Fatal kiss and Sin, in different ways, pull me in.

    Peter and Ray, Neon too has his say, as does MTheory, and I found one I'll mention last, The Midwest Arsonist, offers intense blasts.

    If I missed I apologize, also apologize for not exactly followin the rules.

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    I'd trade places with Dallas for a day..... That way she could be me & I could be her & she would have one whole day of no pain or anything

    I could never write in Dallas' style of writing.. I'm too unconnected with nature... What? It's the truth! :P

 

 

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