I wrote these lyrics and need some opinions on them

A HEART TO COLD TO CARE

In the darkness of our souls
Lies a demon that's so cold
Waiting so long to be freed
In the depths of our own dreams
This demon has control
of all the evil that I know
So if you love me let me go
My hearts to dark to care
for something that isn't there
The pain of you has burned a hole
Deep inside my sadistic soul
The ruthlessness of love
Periced a dagger trough my heart
So if you love me let go
Of all the evil that I know
Your love is like a sick demonic plague
It eats trough my flesh and bone
So if you love me let me go
My hearts just to dark to care
For something that isn't there


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Standing there above your monracy
Looking down at the monstostry
You will laugh at the looks on our face
When we fall and bow to your evil grace
You controll, blind our eyes but you don't know

You cant cant take me
No you cant break me
You can chase me
But youll never stop me

I shall speak the truth as I see it
Moist believe you but I will break you
You cant hide behind your lies forever

Your cover up your lies with war
Cover up your lies with hate
As people die in vain
Ill tell you one thing you will not controll my fate

You cant cant take me
No you cant break me
You can chase me
But youll never stop me

I will rise against
I will speak against
I will not let this become a one world government

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Here in the darkness, we both turn to gray
Waiting in silence trying to forget the pain
This sadictic plauge has rotted my soul
You will not know the demons that ive let go
The vampiric addiction has cursed trough my vains
Feeding the appite that I so dearly crave

You were the one that tore out my soul
Ripping the flish tearing it off the bone
Cold was my soul but untold was the pain
The fate that you left me like a rose in the rain

Can you see trough me with your vision
Inside my heart the barless prison
You will see the cold inside me
Waiting there, eterinal hiding

You caused the paluge that rotted my mind
Making me numb that I canot feel inside