Tell me what you think of this poem.?

[Sara]

Tell yourself what you think about you.

Tell yourself how you want your life to be.

Go out on a limb and just,

Dream.



Paint a picture.

Choose your colors extra wise,

Especially what you put on your mind.

Imagine what it'd be like to touch the sky.




Your thoughts are gonna pick you up.

Do you know,

It's good to feel too much.



You got your head in the clouds.

You got yourself thinking out loud.

The more you dream about yourself,

The more that you believe,

That nothing's ever out of reach.

So dream, dream, dream.



You breathe your visions of life.

You pull yourself through the coldest of nights.

YOu steer yourself towards that moment in time,

When you show yourself what it means to fly.



You're giving yourself the will to try.

Do you know,

That there's happy in these lives



You got your head in the clouds.

You got yourself thinking out loud.

The more you dream about yourself,

The more that you believe,

That nothing's ever out of reach.

So dream, dream, dream.




Every time you look at youself.

It's like the best thing,

Every time that you,

Dream.




Your thoughts are gonna pick always pick you up.

Do you know,

It's good to feel too much.

So dream, dream, dream.

The more you dream about yourself,

The more that you believe,

That nothing's ever out of reach.

So dream, dream, dream.

Dream.

[Manu]

Hiiiiiiiii, Your poem is to good I'll say it's excellent.
But i think,
Dream is not the thing which you see when you go to sleep,
But' Dream is the thing........., which never let you slep.