I reposted this 4 more opinions

I'm making my own manga
The story is a girl who is new to a school falls in love with a guy and also vice versa
However another girl becomes. Jealous of the girl and at night won the new girl is walking all by herself she sneaks up from behind anh knocks her out...
The new girl suddenly wakes up to find herself strapped to a coffee table in her lingerie in the jealous girls basement she sees the jealous girl skyping the guy telling him that if he dosent make out with the jelois girl in 3 days she will kill the new girl
What do you think so far? What should I call it?