What do you think of my poem?

[YHWH iz EPIC]

"Daytime feeling hazy." This doesn't make sense. How can daytime feel hazy? Weather can be misty, but it certainly cannot feel hazy.

"Your feet are so adorn." Sorry, but feet are not very alluring, unless you're fond of feet.

I'm sorry, but the rhymes & context of this poem is colossally cliche. They are not coherent either. It does not flow eloquently; it's contrived. Poetry is not about riveting rhymes, but it is indeed about expressing an emotion with vivid sentiments and immaculate imagery. Focus on something and write about it; don't focus on consuming rhymes into your poem.