You seem to be a sensitive person, who loves freedom and respect it.
the more you write poems, the better they will be.
good luck
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10-27-2008, 11:15 PM #11saedhhm
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10-27-2008, 11:17 PM #12Oscar C
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It's a nice poem, full of sensibilities and colors. But I don't like the title. Given the chance, I would change it to Drugged which is more powerful and graphic. But Caged is okay too! Congratulations for a well-written poem.
Good luck to you.
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