thank you? Still experimenting with different forms


Dyslexic grip

i captured
dissappointment
and held it in my eye
saw clear its choked
expression
let out a
strangled cry

so offered him
my shoulder
to ease his injured pride
and told him
that i loved him
while all his hope
then died
Oh yes, there's a typo in disappointment - sorry!

Catching the problem my grandson has, this is about his grades he has just received. It hurt us both today