Thread: Will This Make a good story ?

It is about a familey with nine kids and the parents got devorced and there is a snotty step sis and i dont know what else also what would be a good twist

Your story not ours

be original

maybe look to your own life

Sounds a bit like cinderella, . . mixed with cheaper by the dozen

yeah probaly

one good kid has to kill another child on accident and the snotty girl is rewarded with trust for ratting the good kid out all while the other kid is somewhat shunned

you have to make this really funny like cheaper by the dozen. Good luck with a twist!

anything can be a good story. Just start writing and see how it turns out.

a good twist would be to make the snotty step sis die doing something real heroic like saving one of their lives or something, then they all feel bad and question themselves......and they get over it and let it go.....

its a pretty straightforward plot that's been done many times before

hahah its ounds pretty good to me! just dont make it too melodramatic and it should turn out great

um...9 kids attack snotty step sister to unite the parents so that they will fall in love again. lol.