Thread: Help with a thesis statement asp! ten points to first logical answer!?

The movie, The Bucket List, successfully illustrates the theme "fulfilling all of your dreams" using humor, friendship and the determination to succeed.

How about something like
The theme of fulfilling one's dreams was portrayed in The Bucket List because it showed determination to accomplish goals, a sense of humor about the subject of death, and the importance of friendship.

Ok I am writing a media analysis of movie the bucket list. I have started the sentence like this
The theme, “fulfilling all of your dreams,” was portrayed successfully in the movie The Bucket List because of the humor used, the friendship.....

and i want to add in determination.

maybe you could help me reword it...its kind of fuzy sounding to me.

thanks!

my teacher told me to use if then and becuz...

In the movie,The Bucket List, the theme, “fulfilling all of your dreams,” means that the friendship represented how the characters interacted and were portrayed successfully because of the humor used.

The Bucket List successfully portrayed the theme, "fullfilling all of your dreams," because of the humor used, the friendship made and the determination to live life at its fullest.
or
A successful portrayal of the theme, "fullfilling all of your dreams," in The Bucket List is due to the usage of humor, the meaning of friendship and the determination to make the most of life.
hope i helped...good luck!