I must walk this path
towards the light but away from the sun
Beauty in the horizon, dawn in the snow
Walking the trek without taking a step
Grace in the soil, magnificence in the breeze
I walk the path


Version 2 (Rhyming)
I must walk this path
towards the light but away from the sun
Beauty in the horizon, dawn in the snow
No need to run
No weight to tow.
Grace in the soil, magnificence in the breeze.
Walking the trek without taking a step
I walk this path


I just write poems to relax myself, if I was good at them it would be awesome but I know i'm not but I'm not writing them to be good so no a huge deal. Ironically I'm asking which of these is better haha, i'm torn between the two versions I wrote (summit day on kilimanjaro when I wrote them)

Thanks,