I wrote a poem, will you give feedback please?

[Alan Wilson]

Along with feedback i'd like your interpretations as well! what feelings and images does it evoke?



Again it falls...
descending, as the mighty gavel of justice
ever present and wholly fearsome
yet curiously soothing... strangely trustworthy

As the unmistakable sensations embrace,
the tingling chill, the glassy dew
I halt, amidst the chaos, to reflect
and bear witness to hope.

For as the masses disperse like ants,
from the clutter of mystical turmoil,
to find there eternally elusive ease
my gaze pursues a lone marine

Through the shower that threatens and nips
across the muck he strolls
and though the mobs run hunched and scared
this man takes all in stride

with a head held high
arms firmly at side
an air he does posses
of a vigor so fierce
and a mettle of awe
yet none give due respect
to find **THEIR** eternally elusive ease

[Michelle]

awesome!!! really touching!