This poem is called Teenagers
Some are hated for
Things they can’t control
Smart kids are hated
Just for being smarter
Sporty girls are pushed aside
Just for their speed and strength
Why in the big melting pot
Can shy and outgoing not melt?
Or those who are different
From everybody else?
Being a teen is tough
Everyone knows that
But why can’t teens
Empathize with teens?
How do you like it?
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GuestI like the concept, but it seems to lack passion.
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